Good
This movie is pretty tight yo.
Good
This movie is pretty tight yo.
Hell yeah!
Very nice.
The story was very compelling and I really look forward to future installments. (If there are any.)
The animation was pretty good, and the music was perfect with the flash. Really nice work. :D
Inspiring.
This movie is truly what clock day is all about.
Big beautiful B(oob)s.
Funnnnnnnny
That was ace.
Wade as the bad guy, and strawberry clock as the underdog. Kudos to you sir. Kudos indeed.
Fantastic.
I don't think I'v# s##n such fin# work sinc# I was a young boy. I gr#w up in a cottonfi#ld and, w# didn't g#t to s## such things as th#s#.
Better
That was much better than the previous chapters. You're getting better at animating and I can see your progression with these flashes.
Keep going at this pace and you can be really good one day.
thank you. jaiba productions is proud of this chapter. be on the look out for the next installment of the last hour series
Nice.
Really fluid and very easy on the eyes. I find it hard to believe you didn't used 3d on the antenna, because it's very good. Really nice work on that. I saw where you used FBF and I thought you did pretty well with it, and I'm sure you'll get even better in that department.
I also really liked the usage of an ambient song in the background. I don't think anything else would have fit, also good choice on the song.
Hmmm...
I liked this a bit better than the first, but there are a few things you could improve upon.
In the opening, there seems to be a lot of noise from breathing into the mic. I suggest trying to minimize that if you can. You can maybe put something over the mic, or something of that nature.
Also, the chapters themselves aren't very long, or really all that interesting. I think it would be better if you put them all together, but you seem to be doing fine with the chapters, so keep doing that I suppose.
All in all though, it was pretty good I suppose. I'll look forward to the next chapter.
thank you. these chapters are warm ups for a grand chapter come chapter 5. thanks for your review.
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